Yo... I am not kiddin'... It is indeed 6.15 a.m and I haven't slept a wink... and here I present the attested and validated proof supporting the inertia of my impulsive insanity and love....
Love so wild
That it drops in from the lamp
Love such a bubble
Glassy colors shining a vamp
Love such a rythm
Dancing every tune upto it
Love that jerk
Hiccups cook up every minute
Love that pranks
Love that freaks
Timeless and insane
Movie geeks
Love thats the wispy cloud
Beserk like the sine wave
Love that blurts aloud
Laughter sparkling rave
Love it is
Love that I miss
Love thats whacky
A flicker it stays and then its gone
Love that lingers
More than every moment that passes on
If You get every word of What I wrote... Get back to me :) I might want to go out with You( Only Guys Apply Plz...)
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@vamck
Hey... I understand ur ideas abt love.. but then I guess u missed the point... whtever u reffered to is not at l wht I am tryin to at at!!... Lets c wht other hav to say abt it :)
Love ....drops in from the lamp- this could be the wild wisp of a flame which is dancing in the wind.
Love .. shining a vamp - makes a vamp look beautiful like a light forming a spectrum on a bubble of soap water (but it is as effervescent as the bubble which can burst any time) ....
the next line is simple so not explaining it ...
love that jerk... every minute - love makes u look like a nervous jerk, startled by everything as u are in ur own world
love that pranks.... movie geeks - love makes freaks like movie geeks freekier
love thats the wispy...sine wave- i don't agree with this the sine wave is not berserk, its very regular, u could have taken any odd (3rd order, 5th order etc) degree equation (thats berserk !!)
love that blurts...sparkling rave- love is like the sudden giggle with the 32 ka set shining
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@Varis
Ahem Ahem...
We'll take this offline! :P
hey Prathi!
Awesome babes!
I think this is THE BEST poem of yours so far.. simple yet so impacting..
I love everything about it..!
Keep rockin roomie!! :)
:) ... Deviated mind !!.....!! :)
But i liked the way you explained the Jerk'ing when one hiccups .... its nice to watch the one you love do tht na !!
here here!! me!!! me!!!!!! gimme a chanceee plzzzzz!!!!!!! m dying!! ..ur's
secret admirer! :D
Noooooo........ ways....me first......me !! me !!!....I have a car...too ...can drive down to Pune.... the above @$$ has to take a flight & u ll be old n dead by the time he makes money to land here..... so mee !!....mee !!!... Here only!!....
Just kidding! But good one... keep the goodness flowing :) I cant say much coz I dont believe in that notion any more I guess.. bt good luck n god bless :)
A flicker it stays and then its gone
@GJ
But it lingers more than every moment that passes on!! Thnx dear for the comment... was missiing your comments! :)
Looks like you covered pretty much everything in here, if you know what I mean :)
Prathi you talked about each and every word.. mujhe ek word bhi samajh main nahi aaya.. ye kya likha hai!! :P
can you please translet it in a understandable form :P :P
@ Nagesh.. Guess I do :)
@ Kavish.. yar dil ki bhasha hai..isko jubaan se nahi dil se samajhte hain :PP i knw thoda zyada ho gaya
This is rich... rhythmic rhyming and all,
I think the imagery is quite self explanatory - with room for personal interpretation...
Do let me know what you think of this song i wrote!
http://grubbyhalo.blogspot.com/2008/12/candy-cellophane.html
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